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funny man XD

It's a great flash but it was to short, say for all the jokes. You should have had one that laster more then 5 bseconds, Some thing like a domin effect. Mario does one thying gets knocked away, flls on some one yadda yadda yadda.Some joke are good when they are short but soom are good when they are lomg. But don't make the jokes to long other wise people will get bored.

Prett good :)

Damn good job man, I wasn't expecting the end part. Very funny.

LOl

I liked it so much I watched it 20 times XD

first try, pritty good.

I likes it, it could have been a little smoother but yea pritty good. Next time just o close up on the fighting or make the sprites faster and put sound in when link slashes.

i like it

weird. i like something like this. the graphivs is awsome. ummmm... What else.'

oh yea. it needs better music, sum kind of rock music or something like that.

The-Superhero responds:

The amazing thing is you didnt vote zero the amazing thing wasnt the music

it was strange...

With it all being blue i sort of felt like i was stitting in a room watching a mission breifing on something... Here are a few things that can help you along

1: work on your art skills, it's one of the most important things that you need in animations.
2: music was ok, it fit in with the animation.
3: dont spam porrly drawn explotions, i see it once i dont need to see it again, if you are going to do this then have 1 sign with lots of sound effects behind it or something.
4: it needs movement, not just copying and pasting, the only thing that really moved was the sun.
5: if your going to write things with the paint brush, please, PLEASE practise with it, i could bairly read it.
6: to short

well for this ill gine you 4/10 2/5 But keep it up amd get better :)

noob

this sort of video has been done already and has made to the front page for over a month! before you make a flaso why not look for any thing similar before you start going on the long road of wasting you god danm time!

compaired to the other one this doest diserve to be on ng >:C

Lythero responds:

Dude, first off, I never knew about the other flash. Secondly, it hasn't been a waste of time at all. Because of it:

1: I've learned more about flash
2: I now have a finished project to get a real grade for university, thus heading one step closer to a degree doing what I love to do (animate)
3: I've got something to post as my first flash on newgrounds

Submitting it to newgrounds was a second thought. But it seems to be doing quite well anyways, and I'm fairly proud of that for 4 days work :3

okay....

there could have been more talking in it or 1 thing, and maybe have it be a little longer too.

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