blazer133's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DE_dust2 Outtakes]

grate, but you messed up on the aniamtion a bit.

The part where the guy i ranting at the idiot, while he's climbing up the crate, his head was quickly disapearing and reapearing, like there were some frame where you forgot to put his head in.... Or did you mean for that to happen?

WX responds:

The flash animation is playing at 25 frames per second. Turn the quality settings down if your computer isn't fast enough to render it and it should play just fine.

[Learn 2 Read]

omg lol.

That was awesome! it gave me a good old chuckel. XD

[I love the HALO World]

Pure awesome.

Just fantastic. and making it into a pixel animation was just brilliant, :3

10/10 5/5 faved.

hope you make another.

[Jumper Stick]

To soft.

the animation was great, but I didn't feel the intecatiy a stick fight should have, it felt like they were slapping each other around. try to make the screen shack for heavy hitting attacks, or have the screen move haster when he disapears from sight.

anthoer thing, when the stick men were fighting, you seemed to have limited your self to useing maybe one or two to interact with the main character, expand on that, use ALL the stick me, have them all move aroun,d even if they dont see him, have them look around because they hear something weird going on.

and show more blood, a stick flash should always have lots of blood ;)

[The Human Snot]

well well well.

You have some talent ma boy. Your first flash hit the front page. That's a sigh to keep working on your flashes :D The movement of the characters could have been a little better; it looked a little jumpy for me, and maybe add in some suspenseful music as he runs or something?

[Music Is An Epic Thing]

Dude....

Absolutly amazing O_o the intro with the zoom up to the Ng logo got me. I didn't need to watch anything else after that to give you a 10. but I did. and that was EPIC to such a point that i couldn't breath.

[The Ignored Monster]

really well done.

How did you do that anyway? Well good, can't wait to see what else you have in store for us! :D

[stickman war]

its a good start

WHAT IT NEEDS IS MUSIC!!

You know when a stick man kills another, a few of them you it so that they don't move anymore, they need to keep moving, they can't just stand there and wait to be killed.

Also. Clean it up a little; the paint strokes are a little un-even.

Also, for the weapons and explosions, add a little more detail to them, make them look like weapons, and not just some lines filled with colours and what not.

Like I said, this is a good start. one day maybe you'll make the front page.

A little advice though.

While making your move, be VERY picky ABOUT EVERY LITTLE THING. Music, animation, WEAPNOS, everything. Adding detail and what not. also If you want your flashes to get better, look at other stick man flashes and watch them carefully. And if your work is no where near as good as theirs then go back and redo it, and keep doing that until it comes out the way you wanted it.

KEEP UP THE WORK YOUNG ONE! ONE DAY YOU'LL HAVE YOU DAY IN THE SPOT LIGHT! :)

crafto responds:

thanks, in my next work i will do it better, remember this is my first long flash with sounds.