blazer133's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lady in the water]

It all looks geart except for one thing.

If you dont mine me saying. But the mouth, it seems tad tosmall for the overall face.

It could just be me though. Great job notheless.

emiliapaw5 responds:

Thanks, yeah I agree, but since this is an old piece I won't go back to fixing it, I tried fixing the mouth in the past( her mouth was actually even more smaller XD), she didn't look right with a bigger mouth.

This is a blend of anime and realism, I hope I do a better job next time :)

[Sun]

Very good.

But it doesn't look like sun, it looks more like on of your electric orb things or a planets thats starting to blow up. BUT STILL VERY AWESONE! :D

khote responds:

thanks

[Playstation Two]

What?

A lot wrong with it? like what? :O It looks perfect to me!

EvilRaccoon responds:

Hehe, things like if you look at the front part of the disc tray, it gradually gets darker along edge, it shouldn't be like that, the light should be consistant along it. Also the bottom of it is way too sharp.

And most of all, which is a bit daft, where is the power coming from? There are no cables. haha. :P

[Megatron (HOC) Version]

umm...

Yea, it's an OK pictiure, I would have expected something better from you, no offence. But everything about him, the proportions ,his legs, that gun, the angle. it's all so... so wrong. Maybe if your ever up to it, try making this pic again, because right now. it isn't that good.

What really gets me is that building.

MindChamber responds:

sorry for disappointing you. I hope you'll be ok.

[No Spartan Left Behind]

Something you should know.

ok, first of all decent drawing, but you should make the place a little more battle torn other then peaceful and grassy and what not. maybe have a destroyed city in the background.

OK. Now for the Spartan. Spartans are not like normal humans, after reading all the halo books. A Spartan doesn't stop fighting until he/she falls to the ground broken. She just looks like she was all cut up, oh and she should be all buned since the covenant use plasma weapons. But seriously, she would still be walking up straight beside the other guy, Spartans show no sigh of weakness unless they're dead.

and the spartans helmet looks like it was stretched.

PickledGear responds:

Yeah this is a pretty old drawing, I was just trying out new poses and such. The background I kinda just threw together in around 5 minutes suppose to look the the covenant campaign level a bit.

[EMO LOLWUT]

uhh huh...

Dude. You just destroyed a an already stupid meme, the shape of the pare looks to bulgy, the wair added on just looks stupid eventhough your trying to portay it as an emo (sorry to say) While i'm on the topic of emo, where the hell are the scratches and cut marks? it's not an emo without that, it's just goth. and mayby have it lose some of it colour so it's more of a grayish geen colour, and make it's teeth look like their rotting out of it's head.

Pocky88 responds:

I know it's a stupid meme, but it's just a parody. But, thanks for your feedback. Who said that all emos cut? I'm not stereotypical.

[Dragon's Night]

well well...

first things first, your pics need to be bigger. It's hard to see certian things when it's that small. Ok... The shading on the back cloud could be changed so that it fits in more with the front one, it looks like you just did it randomly. Though small, you made it like a lot like it's from an old 8 bit video game, props on that :)

The gradiant is pretty good, but yoou could change it a little more and make the lines a little thinner, by doing this you'll use more shades of the same colour giving it a better transistion as it gets brighter. As a fellow ms paint arttist, try to stray away from the shape tools and the pencil tool, try to work more with the brush, it pays off after a while.

Alkso, try to add a few more layers to the clouds, or add in different grayish colous to them, it'll make them stand out more.

RandomExploit responds:

I will consider these words in future works.

[Prince of Persia]

neat!

thats prett awesome! :D SCOUTED FOR AWESOMENESS

g-kwan155 responds:

thanks for the appreciation.

[Combine City Guard]

ponder ponder...

alright... heres what I have to say. All round the drawing is great. but the backgroun smugges... Even though your making people focus on the guy, you could still give the background some sort of detail, the smugges make it look rushed im some way, the gun he's holding, it looks too simple, try adding some smaller parts to it or some rust or something like that, the lighting that guys back though. thats perfect! and because you did a great job on the guy, i'll scout you :)

Tommy-Gun responds:

Thanks!

[SC- Silver Threads]

rate it T

It's an ok pic, i could use a little more detail, like giving her eyes or something. But rate it T, I don't having no under shirt like that would be pleasing for little kids, ( or their parrents)

smooth-criminal13 responds:

I thought about that XD now that some has said something I will xD and the eyes are supposed to be blank its like a character trademark for her.