guy below me.
your an ass this song is great! but it contredicks its title XD
really good man, just keep up the great work!
guy below me.
your an ass this song is great! but it contredicks its title XD
really good man, just keep up the great work!
You know how theres that pause...
ok the song is great but if you want it to live up to its nam,e {never ending} then you have to find a way to get rid of the pause at the end before it loops over, if you listen to music in vodeo games they always have songs loops and you cant tell if its about to loop or not. try to get rid if the pause at the end and truly making the song {never ending}
great song in general though.
thats a good idea, but that's not really what I meant by never ending, I kind of meant that the same tune is repeating so it is kinda of never ending. I know what your talking about though. Thanks for the idea, and the review.
really good...
samething s to what Bballdude9997, it neds to be fixed up a little,and there are a few sounds in the background the need to be lounder, all i can hear is the drum set.
if any one votes useless on this then you cant tell what is critisism and what is abuse.
Yeah. The other instruments are hazed out a lot. I'll be sure to avoid this in future.
Great job!
you did a very good job when making this! there are jsut a few things you new to touch up on .
clearity is a little off, it makes it sound like a jumbled mess in the background,
and what happyhomicide said, you do need to practice with the guitar a little more,
what it needs is more background guitar sounds to, just one guitar being plaied like that doesn't sound that great.
i'll give you a 4/5 and 8/10 Just practice dude, there is always room for more practice. :)
I made this song a long time ago, also it is an artificial guitarplay, to play it on a real guitar wouldn't be difficult, I have a real guitar but I've got no way to record it in an acceptable way, so I just play guitar for myself and make some songs on my pc just to keep some ideas recorded
Also I like the song like it is, a little primitive and repititive, I wanted the song to be simple and aggressive, of course I could add background guitars etc. but it would kill the simplicity of the song, but I understand that this song isn't enjoyable like it is for all people,it's kinda raw and unbalanced, but I wanted it like this.
However, thanks for the suggestions, for reviewing and for enjoying :)
greets HB87
AAAAAGGGHH
I can't listen to it anymore! it's to sad! :C it's great! but it's just to depressings |:C
All your song are so sad.
They are all so very sad, but they are sooo good. Where do you come up with these songs? and the way you have it loops, most people wouldn't notice it untill they looked at it. YOU ARE AWSOME! keep up the good work :)
My personality is very introspective, and I spend a great deal of time thinking. So music like this seems to come naturally. I'm not depressed, but I feel like this style has depth to it. Knowing some music theory also helps. :)
I like it but
its sounds very staticy in the background in some parts of the song. Other then the great job :)
okay then lol . thanks for the rev I guess
Oh wow
I would really like to use this song in a flash i'm making :')
Do it! :)
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AAHHHHHH my ears! they are bleeeding!!!! MCjessus... The song was funny... you just need learn how to sing...
BTW i'm Zarth
you may hate me after
But all it sounds like, lie your beltching in the mike.
I don't hate you, but I seriuosly consider that you try to listen to more than just the vocals, becuase when you think about it, the guitar playing is very difficult. Just becuase its distorted doesn't mean its easy to play. I should know.
Also, belching doesn't sound like that.
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