blazer133's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Paint Brawl P]

oookay...

Alright. all round you did an OKAY job. The shading for the 2 flat rocks are off, if the top parts are facing the light, they should not have any sort of shading on them the same goes for the one beside the guy with the guitar, plus with that rock it looks like you missed a part of it, it doesn't look complete. The shading on the island thing hold up that castle doesn't go along with the jagged rocks, making that part look like shit sorry to say. The same for the rock in the upper right corner. and the perpective for the rock right beside the castle ( to the right) is off.

Also, even though you gave Mcj more then usual muscle, the pose just made him look girly and the anatomy is wrong as well. The guy with the guitar, if you were to move his guitar out of the way, his legs would be to small, you need to extend them.

I would suggest deleting this current pic and going over, find all the mistakes then re upload it. because this... this just looks like crap.

I know you could of done better then this. :/

destructin responds:

Haha! I still see you hate me.

[Look into my eye]

huh...

the way you did it, the curvs of the furn and the lighting, those little electric stands in the eye... it just draws you in. I can't stop stairing at it.... O_O I like it. I like it so much that I think everyone should see it.

SCOUTED FOR PURE AWESOMENESS!

DragonHuik responds:

lol thank you ^_^

[hatsune miku sunset]

she doesnt fit in.

as awesome as it is. The lighting and texture... It doesnt look like that the background and her are the same picture, she sticks out way to much. and you have the lighting facing the wrong way, like the light on her legs, hair, and face, there facing away from the sun. so I have to deduct 2 points from that, sorry. But other then those 2 things, this pic is awesome.

combatplayer responds:

thanks. i know abaut the lightning effects.. but i tried making one where the light came from behind and also where it came from that side.. it just dident look good.. so i chose to ignore it n then finish it with the light u can see on the image.

thanks for the review^^

[Piece By Piece]

fun looking!

Yea know... if this was animated, you could make it one kick ass logo for something. Nice use of colours! (it reminds me of the transformers movie thatâEUTMs coming out soon)

Lexileus responds:

Transformers 2 is gonna be fucking awesome

[This Cold Darkness]

very mystical...

It just makes me want to stair at that light for hours wondering what could be over there O_O

Lexileus responds:

Haha, Don't stare too long, you might get blind :)

[Anistick D.M.C_Dante]

the sword doesnt fit.

But everything else looks great. The sword sticks out from the rest to much and it's position just looks strange. But the lighting effects are awesome! The blade could use a little more detail, like to indents on the sides like it's been worn away or something.

BigDrawMantheGoloid responds:

You have a good eye.
That opinion of yours is going to help me a lot to improve.
thanks for the review.

[Swords of life]

sweet!

very organic and claw looking. Very creative, reminds me of an old game that I use to play. :)

Keep up the good work!

BigDrawMantheGoloid responds:

thank you
I surely will

[the thinker]

awesome!

It really shows the thnking span of some people. XD the detail is great!

capoeira14 responds:

thanks =] thers still a lot of room for improvments but im too fucking lazy to do anything about it :P

[I LOVE TERRORIZING]

bleh

To simple, not really all that great. It needs more. i9 know you could do better then this.

Yacazuma responds:

Your review is really vague, and hardly told me how I can improve.

[Nari Kiss]

Awesome.

The detail is just fantastic. Her curels look like chocolate XD

Vortex00 responds:

chocolate XD ok, now I need to revisit this picture.