blazer133's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mirnah's head]

you did an amazing job but...

The head... for some reason it looks rather small compaired to jis horns on the back of his head and his neck... It just doesn't seen to look right... Maybe try extending his head a litle more or slightly narrowing his neck or something.

one other thing, is he supost to be a painting on the wall? if not, he looks like he is, you need to add in some shading on the wall, like around his head, it looks flat abound that part.

Great drawing nonthe less. you just need to do a few touch ups here and there and it'll be parfect :)

[Dragon's Night]

well well...

first things first, your pics need to be bigger. It's hard to see certian things when it's that small. Ok... The shading on the back cloud could be changed so that it fits in more with the front one, it looks like you just did it randomly. Though small, you made it like a lot like it's from an old 8 bit video game, props on that :)

The gradiant is pretty good, but yoou could change it a little more and make the lines a little thinner, by doing this you'll use more shades of the same colour giving it a better transistion as it gets brighter. As a fellow ms paint arttist, try to stray away from the shape tools and the pencil tool, try to work more with the brush, it pays off after a while.

Alkso, try to add a few more layers to the clouds, or add in different grayish colous to them, it'll make them stand out more.

RandomExploit responds:

I will consider these words in future works.

[Prince of Persia]

neat!

thats prett awesome! :D SCOUTED FOR AWESOMENESS

g-kwan155 responds:

thanks for the appreciation.

[Arby]

it's alright...

The torso is waaaayyy to long and the legs needs to be longer, The arm holding the gun needs some shape to them other then noodles like that, the gun is too small, the arm hold the sword needs to be longer, his neck is way to think, but all in all this is an "ok" drawing. Keep practicing though, you'll get better :)

[Combine City Guard]

ponder ponder...

alright... heres what I have to say. All round the drawing is great. but the backgroun smugges... Even though your making people focus on the guy, you could still give the background some sort of detail, the smugges make it look rushed im some way, the gun he's holding, it looks too simple, try adding some smaller parts to it or some rust or something like that, the lighting that guys back though. thats perfect! and because you did a great job on the guy, i'll scout you :)

Tommy-Gun responds:

Thanks!

[Titan]

not mind blowing?

I'll have to dissagree with you on that :D all the colours, they just blend in so well together, it really gives you that "the planet is nothing but a dust ball" kind of feeling.

i'mma going to fave this :3 (I like space stuff)

[SC- Silver Threads]

rate it T

It's an ok pic, i could use a little more detail, like giving her eyes or something. But rate it T, I don't having no under shirt like that would be pleasing for little kids, ( or their parrents)

smooth-criminal13 responds:

I thought about that XD now that some has said something I will xD and the eyes are supposed to be blank its like a character trademark for her.

[Super Paint Brawl P]

oookay...

Alright. all round you did an OKAY job. The shading for the 2 flat rocks are off, if the top parts are facing the light, they should not have any sort of shading on them the same goes for the one beside the guy with the guitar, plus with that rock it looks like you missed a part of it, it doesn't look complete. The shading on the island thing hold up that castle doesn't go along with the jagged rocks, making that part look like shit sorry to say. The same for the rock in the upper right corner. and the perpective for the rock right beside the castle ( to the right) is off.

Also, even though you gave Mcj more then usual muscle, the pose just made him look girly and the anatomy is wrong as well. The guy with the guitar, if you were to move his guitar out of the way, his legs would be to small, you need to extend them.

I would suggest deleting this current pic and going over, find all the mistakes then re upload it. because this... this just looks like crap.

I know you could of done better then this. :/

destructin responds:

Haha! I still see you hate me.

[Look into my eye]

huh...

the way you did it, the curvs of the furn and the lighting, those little electric stands in the eye... it just draws you in. I can't stop stairing at it.... O_O I like it. I like it so much that I think everyone should see it.

SCOUTED FOR PURE AWESOMENESS!

DragonHuik responds:

lol thank you ^_^