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Earths end: novel.

Posted by blazer133 - December 19th, 2008


This is the first part of the story, it has a few spelling errors but i'll fix those later on. i'll add the next part to the prologue in a few days.

Prologue: The release Part 1 of 4(Book 1 of 3)

It was like any other normal day on a small community street that had houses lined up along a smooth paved road with a few cracks here and there. Birds flew around in the gleaming morning clear sky as the bright yellow sun rose up from the horizon, lighting up a dissident metropolis. It was a very peaceful morning, the dew on the grass reflecting the suns light making the grass Sparkle as a gentle breeze blew by. The leaves on the trees made a smooth rustled sound as the wind blew right through every tree on the block, the smell of freshly cut grass came with the breeze, a few blocks down, there was a man mowing his lawn with his spiffy new red lawn mower, so shiny, it reflected the blinding light of the sun. Across the street, a man walked outside of his house with a black suit case in his left hand, wearing a clean white jacket and black genes. The man with the Lon mower yelled "good morning!"And waved his hand to go with the pleasant greeting. The man with the suit case smiled and raised his hand while leaning down to press a button on his car to start it up for the day.

When he pressed the button, the car started up, making a humming like charging sound you would hear from defibrillator but with a lower pitch. All the lights and gate along the dash board and the top of the front view mirror lit up with a brilliant blue light. When he sat down in the driver's seat, he put his sit case gently on the next seat beside him. He reached up and pressed a small red button that had a picture on a moving car on the front. The car started to rustle back and forth, 2 bright white light lit up underneath the car. Then the car started to slowly rise from the ground, knocking away any small bit of sand or any kind of garbage that may have rested underneath. Then a small door opened up on the back part which revealed 2 more lights slowly loominating to a bright white light.

Then he was off, a couple meter off the ground and rising, the car started to travel a faster to an average speed of 75Km an hour. As he drove to the metropolis he flew over a cement wall which kept anything to fall off the edge of the mechanical platform which stood there to house small communities such as that one, these platforms littered the out skirts on the large metropolis, away from all the noise pollution. These things seem to large buildings them self's, the platform extended down wards for hundreds of stories until your vision is obstructed by a think grayish fog the lingered about in some parts of this city. The large platform had bright yellow windows that stood out from and small parking lot places for cars to fly into and park.

As he drew closer to the main part of the metropolis he could start to make out other cars, trucks, flying freighters. They seemed to number in the thousands, all speeding along going off to do the daily business. The cars criss crossed between each and every building, but were all in orderly fashion. Invisible 4 lained roads that stacked up to the tallest and the lowest parts of the city.

He finally made it to his destination, a building that was gold in colour that jetted up into the sky and formed a point, it had for other light gray parts that were smaller and lined the four corners on the building, they all extended up wards like the middle and came they all came to 4 independent points. The man landed his car in a docking port almost completely full of other members that worked in the very same building.

He got out of his car, powered it down and grabbed his suit case and started to make his way across the parking lot to 1 of 7 other doors that lined the a wall to the left of his car. He took the 4 one seem as it was the only one left, he rose his right hand and pulled out a key card that had a bio hazard symbol on the front, he swept it through a slot on the right side of the door. There was a humming sound. He waited for a moment and turned around to gaze at the parking lot which was lit up with a blinding yellow light from the sun. Ah a huge freighter like ship passed by blocking out the sun, the door opened and revealed an elevator, and he stepped inside and swiped the car again on a slot on the inside. The door closed and fumbled a little then started to slowly move down.

With a grin of his face, thinking of the work that he has accomplished in his when the door opened, it stooped at a laboratory with a while tiled floor and a very tall grayish roof with dangling bright lights above lighting up the room. A huge machine in the middle of the room was holding a small clear orb with which was filled with an Omanis purple liquid. , along the machine were computers that were monitoring this liquid for anything that seemed out of the ordinary. He walked over to a large computer, he put down the black suit case beside him and raised his left arm and stook out his thumb then pressed it against a small pad on the left side of the Key board of the computer, he waited for a moment as bright green light moved up and down and left to right scanning his thumb print. He slowly removed his thump from the pad and while the 45 inch screen in front of him turned on and said a few words in with a woman voice.

Computer: Hello, Dr. Richard. How may I help you today?


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