Awesome work! if you're making a third, then I can't wait to see what you have instore for us :D
Fantastic! I love this animation that I watched it a second time. The only thing I some what didn't like was the dialogue, it could have been a little better, it seemed some what robotic through most of the animation. Other then that, great work. I hope to see more videos from you soon :D.
so the guy in the castle is the top stick?
Wow, really? thats... thats.... i dont know, I knew nearly every stick men you used in this flash, i wasn't expecting HIM to be the best. Becasue of that, I thought the ending was kinda cheap, what with ending it all in a single bang like that.
the cheering at the end was cool though.
it was good and all.
But why was killing everyone? why motive did he have? I like a lot of the stick action flashes. But sometimes i wish they had SOME sort of story to them.
It does. The main character is an escaped slave. He's trying to free himself and get rid of some villians. :) It's written in the "About" section of the menu btw.
pretty good, but (CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEW AHEAD)
Tihs is a fantastic flash, I havn't seen many actual 3D animations posted on this site. but as geart as it is, it does have a few faults in it that I noticed, and i hope thisreview wil lhelp you in the future when it comes to making things like this again.
Larry: I know you were trying to depict a kid who loves combat, that you did rather well. But his movement and overall design seemed rather sloppy to me. You made him look like a plushy, or teddy bear. and the weay he moved just emphansized this. when you look at his battle scene with the zombies, it was like watching a teddy bear being puppeted by a mother to amuse a baby. Now I know that you probably had no other choice but to go with this, what with time constraints and funding/ time. but look out for that, and try to fix it before the animation turns into it. What i would suggest here are more dramatic movements to make it a little more appealing to watch.
Gigantor: that fight scene with him and mindchamber was fantastic, the one thing that got to me here was that camera angle. usually when you have someone charging at another, you do a side view rather than an over view. if you did this, it would have made it look more dramatic in seeing his fists actually hit the ground during his charge. Also, with this, you should have added in puffes of dust with every stomp. Also, when he gets stabbed by the stick, you should have added in some sort of blood splatter opon impact.
Music and sound affects: for the most part, the music sort of over powered the SFX, which is a shame, a way you could have fixed this would have been using batter, less foggy sounds for the punching and what not, like during the final battle, it was quite hard to hear the punching SFX from the music. just play around with the volumes and see how it turns out.
Diolauge: the only porblem i had here was that smoe of it was kind of cheese.
Also, what happened to all othe other characters that didn't die during the second scene? it was kind of a bummer to not see them move on, what happened to them?
mario actually puches the blocks rather then hitting his skull on them.
This is all so very awesome.
I love your art style and the jokes that you make. So when will you make one involving fable III? or will you make ne for fable III
PLEASE MAKE ONE FOR FABLE III D:
I might, but it'll be a while.
Best thing i'veseen all week. You never seaseto amaze me shot down. I never knew falling start went through that when they fell.
I should try to save them! D:
I hate you!
I hatye you and your shorte teaser videos! >:'C
Please make more! just from watching this, you made it look like such a geart video.
What lacks in art, makes up in humor.
Wow, just wow, funniest thing I've seen all week. You have a talent, I just love how you can come up with such random, unsuspecting things for this. I was expecting the guy to jump out of the bag somehow, I never expected him to be the sandwich. XD
And the hole chair thing, that was like the icing on the cake. :D
Very well done, but maybe you could work on your art just a little? yea know, clear up some of those bulges you get from using the paint brush, maybe make some lines a little straighter, or smoother, stuff like that. :)
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